Kathleen Jackson, a teacher in Marin County , CA, posts the following process she shared with Robert Shetterly and her students, using the poem , “The Peace of Wild Things” by truth teller, Wendell Berry.
When Rob Shetterly visited our school in the fall of 2009, he not only talked about social issues, art and writing; he recited poetry. One of his recitations was ‘The Peace of Wild Things’ by Wendell Berry, which many students love. With Rob’s encouragement, I had my 7th and 8th grade students read this poem several times aloud in class, then close-read the poem. We discussed it, and they then wrote two to three paragraphs on what it means to them to be free. From there I had them write a poem following Berry’s format. Every student shared his or her final draft with the rest of the class, which led to provocative discussions around the concept of being free.
Following are excerpts from students’ reflections about being free, their actual poems, and quotes about the process.
I find freedom in nature. In nature there are absolutely no requirements; a person can simply live. I personally feel the most free when I am running over wide expanses of grass or sand, my legs effortlessly moving faster that they ever have during the mile run feeling like I could never stop. Everything in nature is free, like the trees reaching toward the sun or the hawks circling from above; and, for a moment, so am I. No one sees me but the animals and they don’t care. I can do almost anything I want in nature; I am free to move, think and speak. In nature I am happy, but most of all I am free. M.H.
I am not free when I am at school. I feel trapped, controlled, and without options. I am under a strict monarchy. I am not truly free until I see the beauty of the snow in front of me. It is then that my eyes light up, my heart starts beating faster, and I am anxious to to and play in it. Snow lets me release myself and forget about everything else in the world. I have only snow. No cars, no fires, no fears. Just snow. M.C.
Being free is being able to be myself without having anyone judge me for being me. I was created to be the way the way I am, and I need to stay that way, no matter what people say or think. L.B.
Although freedom is something that we are born with in this country, I know that the only way I can be completely free is to find it within myself. M.G.
I experience freedom when I am by the bay near my house. I don’t have to think about my problems, and nothing feels that important. I just sit on the rocks and watch the waves crash down. I smell the fennel bushes, and I am peaceful. No one can tell me what to do here; there are no rules or restrictions. This is where I am free. M.L.N.
Freedom is a state of mind. We are able to be creative, unique, and different when we are free. Freedom occurs when we are able to be ourselves, when we don’t hold back and let loose with no fear of criticism or doubt. There is nothing more powerful. H.M.
I swim. The water frees me in a way I can’t describe. The cool feeling against my skin allows my soul to relax, open up, lose the day’s unwanted tension and grief. It helps me realize that I am capable of more than I know, that I have so much more to offer others and myself than I am aware of. It gives me power, a power that comes only with freedom. Only in moments like these, where I am in a certain kind of bliss, can I feel free, feel like I am myself, where I find myself beyond the separation between what I can and cannot do. M.J.
POEMS
Comforting Privacy by Megan G
When life gets hard and there is a homework overload
I cannot be around anyone in my life
I walk up the stairs and calmly shut my door
And take in the space of the room.
No one there, just me, my music, my dresses, and my books
The privacy comforts me; it makes me free
I prance to the closet where my arty dresses lie
One catches my eye, the one that will float me around the room
The one that will sway me from side to side
As the delicate music plays.
My body is free to do what it wants
My body takes over my brain and drifts me to
The bookshelf. I bury my nose into a book.
And I am nowhere
Peace of Mind
Hanna M
In the outside world
My mind is hard at work
But when all is done
I set myself free
Because freedom is
A state of mind
Where there are no restrictions
And no fear
Of criticism,
Judgment,
Or fear of fear itself
Because freedom is one girl
In her world
And that cannot be taken
Away
Familiar Faces by Katherine S
When I feel I’m alone
And I’m lost and trapped in the darkness
I think of my family’s smiles, reflecting like mirrors through my brain
The light bells of my sister’s laugh echo and ring
Taking walks on the beach with my dad,
The silence so easy that no one feels
The need to say a word.
I think of the familiar sound of my mom opening the garage door
And entering with a tired smile
I fall into a peaceful state
Where I can be myself
Once again I think of my family’s faces
And I finally find my way out of the darkness
I am free
The Forest Glade
Nick Ogden
When timeless space drifts across the glade
I feel free
When breezes blow away my troubles
And expel the storm of thoughts from my mind
I feel free
When the sun beats down on me
And warms my heart
I feel free
When I can’t believe what I see
And beauty is all that lies before me
I feel free
Meant to Be
Lily B
I am not perfect
I do not care
I am the way I want to be
And when great sadness grows in me
I remember that I am free
Free from pain
Free from war
Free from hunger
And free from fear
I go outside and hear the wind
Sing its forlorn song
As the trees bend to listen
I know I am free when I see the world
As it was meant to be
The Moment of Serenity by Nick Watkins
Caged in a box with work and stress building up
Paralyzed thinking while emotions
Break loose like a dog released from its empty cage
As the hot flames start to melt down,
I come into the moment of serenity
Deep breaths blown into the air
When at that time the emotions of a fly struggling in a spider’s trap
Give way to the feelings of a bird coasting over the white, sugary snow
The pain and anxiety are flushed away
Freedom is Nowhere by Nick F
Freedom is a rare taste to me
I have small glimpses every once in awhile
Weekends and nights
Temporary reprieves
But then back to reality
School and discipline
Forced to think certain thoughts
Work, problems, and thoughts all day
Then I’m in the desert with
No civilization for miles around
Freedom at last
Finding Freedom by Simone Harrison
Anxiety and the unknown blind me
Binding me to worries, choices, my future
And forming the prison of my mind
Yet the more I try to escape, the more trapped I become
Throw me a book, a lifeline
Imagination, my map
And laughter my wings
These are small reprieves from my cage, but not escape
Nature contradicts the very chemistry of this jail
Warps and bends it until it is no more
Dissolved within the steady magnificence of it
Individuals flourish yet are all connected with the ambience of nature
So am I filled with the joy and tranquility that the growing plants emanate
Full of peace and contentedness that now is now
And then will be then
Simplicity is just a word
But this simplicity is freedom
When Things Don’t go as Planned by Amaia Etcheverry
When things don’t go as planned
And I lie awake at night
In fear that tomorrow will be worse than today
I go and look at pictures of them
Happy, warm smiles and joy
I come into the peace of being with friends
Who accept me for who I am and
Who are there through thick and thin.
And I can feel their presence in my heart
For a time I rest with their memory and I am free.
The Sky is not the Limit by Narimon Farenghi
When I do not have time
To live my life without constant interruptions
In fear of what my obligations will force me to do
I go to the place floating in the air
Where the sky is breached
Full of holes
Where goals were achieved and where wishes came true
I feel the holes in this place
While waiting for my sky not to be the limit
I look up at the beautiful patterns
And I am free.
Night Owl by Samantha Jolson
In the midst of my hectic life
I find no solace in weekends and breaks
For they cannot change the work that is sure to come
The burden of twenty responsibilities
Takes its toll on me and my sanity
Every night I watch the hills swallow the sun and the stars come out of hiding
One by one they emerge
From the darkened sky
And bound through their stable surroundings
I sit at the window, reading, writing, watching, relating
The night is their time
And their time is mine
The nighttime is mine
I am free
Free in Water
Matthew J
Restriction and boundaries
locking me inside
my own shortcomings.
They melt away in water
the restrictions dissolving
crumbling. And I am left,
me, with nothing to shield me
from my own perfection, my own power.
My restrictions gone, my shortcomings evaporated
Leaving me
Free
Reflections following the project:
I never really knew when I was actually free, and this poem helped me get it out in the open. C.M.
Writing a freedom poem was an eye-opening opportunity for me to reflect and look deeply inside myself. It helped me understand who I am as a person while exploring myself as a poet. S.K.
This exercise made me think about what freedom means to me. It wasn’t about what we are promised in the Constitution, although that is very important), it was something more…sometime when I actually feel completely free. Overall, this project made me think more than anything else. K.D.
Writing the poem made me think more about what it means exactly to be free. I could argue that one is never free, but that argument could also turn into one is always free, kind of like how is everyone is rich, then no one is. It was interesting to think about when I’m free and then try to capture that moment. This would have been easier, cooler, if there hadn’t been a ‘follow the Wendell Berry format’. G.L.
Writing prose or a poem about feeling free seems like it didn’t give me the actual feeling but gives instead a description of what freedom is in a way that rings true and leaves my mind wandering searching for freedom. S.H.
It was interesting to read the poem in depth, finding metaphors and hidden messages, and then contemplate freedom. N.F.
Before reading the poem, I felt free. But then, when I really thought about it, I thought more about what made me happy…leading into what makes me feel free. A.H.
When I first read this poem, I was merely looking at words. I read it again, now visualizing images, and the poem sprang to life. I saw a moonlit lake, glistening and rolling as a gentle breeze blew over it. I saw a rich, lively forest full of animals. I saw a huge drake in the lake. It was very peaceful. N.F.
When I read Wendell Berry’s “The Peace of Wild Things,” I thought about his special place, his escape, how he wanders there, almost subconsciously,, how it feels instinctual to him. I thought about where I go as my escape,, and I decided that, whether I acknowledged it or not, I find myself often wandering to the same laces,, most common of which is the dock by the bay. A.D.
When I was panicking about how to finish this assignment, I took my laptop to my desk by the window; and I realized that this was when I was free. I sat down and began writing. S.J.
“The Peace of Wild Things” is an interpretive goldmine. In it Wendell Berry wonders what will happen to his children through any problem. These problems, such as financial woes and corruption, are happening today. When all is lost, we must find a quiet place where man is not judged, but only accepted. A.D.