Narrative
Just a reminder: the third draft of your narrative is due Tuesday, November 18. I will be expecting VERY few mechanics errors (spelling, punctuation, tense shifts, etc.) and an obvious attempt to show sentence variety, strong diction, and poetic devices (similes, metaphors, etc.).
As we speak, I am ensconced in a hotel in downtown Tulsa, a place where they literally roll up the carpet at sundown - we had to briskly walk (frigid wind!!!) four blocks just to find food. We began the day in a cramped, twin-propeller, puddle jumper - also known as an airplane - kind of. After the second plane ride in a similar vehicle, complete with a farting fat man next to me and turbulence which made me feel as if I’d signed up for bronc’ riding at some point, intellectually I know that this beats a 14 hour car ride, but my aching backside is screaming at me. All of this in the name of relaxation! I’ll check in tomorrow after we visit the Fitness Expo (lots of crazy runner people in the same room!!).
Search the above example for creative sentence structure (dash)(and parenthesis), simile, personification, alliteration, vivid verbs, vivid description and a kenning!
Rock on!